This is a story about growing up from a small town. Things that seem so very important to you,
are specks of dust in the sea of life.
Yet we cling to events as major milestones, because they are. At least to those living them they are.
Most of the characters in this book revel in the we are
getting out of dodge and see the world thought patterns, yet as so often
happens of course, the ones who squawk the loudest are the ones who stay all
their lives.
The story could have actually been based on real
events. And, the characters could have
been real as well, but even if they are, one of them just seemed too naive to
be believed. I kept wanting to say
REALLY?
As these people aged, I didn't feel their maturity gained
any footage. I wanted something more to
happen, something that I wasn't expecting, but it just didn't. I think the author has great potential and
should have allowed herself to really embellish the story and characters. There didn't seem to be a real plot to the
story, just a story. No turns you didn't
see coming, as the author told a little too much for you not to read between
the lines. So the surprise was never a
surprise.
For instance, who the characters were behind the mask they
showed to the world were pretty obvious even though it was, I believe, supposed
to be a surprise to you like it was to the main character. How each person reacted to that surprise was
not developed enough for me to grab onto.
I felt the main character was too naive, and the second one too
ridiculous to be taken seriously. It
just seemed like no one would really act that way, or do the things they
did. Maybe I just didn't understand it. Or maybe I just didn't want to, I don't know.
It was not a book I couldn't put down, and not one I would
ever read twice. If you like stories of
growing up, and how that impacts your future, then you might like this
book. I thought the story was okay, but
I would not recommend it as a good read.
I would like to read the author's next book though, as I feel she has
the ability to really put on a show if she lets her characters develop, and
sets the twists and turns stage without opening the curtain part way before
raising it.
Could there be a sequel to
this one.... no. I wouldn't want there
to be, the characters were just not that likeable. But I think a fresh storyline, new characters
that you don't see coming, and Elaine's writing quality could go far. I sense a novel with impact in her future bubbling
in her thoughts, just waiting to be written.
I would definitely read this author again, she has great potential, and
abilities.
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